Actually this is a fairly long story. I started it over, I kid you not, three times. My first seemed too long, and detailed, so I deleted it. The second droned on, and on, so it was boring. Finally, I went and asked my Lang. Arts. Teacher, and he told me a bit of advice, and for once, it made sense! One day, I will probably be better at Synopsis, without any help.
So, yes, it is complete. And I'm going to post it here, so you guys can see it :)
So, here we go:
Synopsis: Inner Secrets
Lucy has always known she was different. It was just how different she was that came as a surprise. When she touches the doorknob of the old house down the street and gets a moonmark on her wrist, it sets off a chain of events that Lucy herself, never thought possible. Suddenly she is thrust into a new world called The Inner, and finds out that all she has ever known is a lie. She learns she is part of a prophecy to destroy the Evil King that rules the Inner with darkness. All she has to do is find the other Essences, the Sun, the Star, and the Earth. However the task itself is not easy. With blood-thirsty monsters called Controllers at every twist and turn, danger is always a threat. Rumors of the Sun being in the Dark Relic, the place where the king lives, sends Lucy, her protectors, and her sister, on their first journey. With Secrets looming over her every step of the way, will Lucy be able to save the Sun, or will she break down under the pressure.
Well, that's it and hopefully it will impress the agents. Thanks for reading, and I'll post real soon!